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Losing to the Sun

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We’re losing the moon
Red velvet blanketing
Its snow-driven white
Still visible under
The curtain of
The bloodlike shade

Halfway there
The ivory tries to
Escape
The crimson’s wrath
But cannot

Two-thirds gone now
We watch in excitement
To see who will win
This battle which is
Seemingly obvious

We’re losing the moon
To the sun
But do not fear
For it will
Return tomorrow
Was watching the total lunar eclipse about a half an hour ago. It's lovely. You should watch. *nods*
Anyway it gave me inspiration. As seen above.
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i like hte visuals. and the metaphor int he piece. nicely done mate